According
to a Writing911.com web
poll, the executive message, which is the letter at the front,
is the most difficult to write. The message took 39% of the
vote, followed by "the whole thing" at 26%.
Bluntly
speaking, most
annual report executive messages are dreadfully
boring or irrelevant. On the other
hand, the best executive messages are more like summaries
of the annual report. Further, the message should make an
emotional connection
with
the readers by reminding them of the good work you are doing to
ultimately make the world a better place. Use the letter to set
the tone or theme for what you are sharing in the rest of the
report.
If you treat the message like an executive summary, your letter
can look something like this, with each line representing one
paragraph.
* Overall focus of last year
* Accomplishment #1
* Accomplishment #2
* Accomplishment #3
* New emphasis for the current or coming year
Following
the above model, your letter will have five paragraphs. Keep
your paragraphs to three to four sentences each, with the total
length of the letter no more than 500-600 words
Are you looking for more advice and sample letters? See our tip sheet, "Writing the Executive Message for Your Nonprofit Annual Report." This is a chapter from our e-book, "How to Write a Nonprofit Annual Report."